5.29.2011

A hole in my foot...

There is a hole in my foot.
And oh is it scaring me.
I think it's a black hole.
Yes one day it will eat up my foot!
and I will cry!
My foot will die!
And I'll be confused
as to why!
Goodbye!
Posted by Lily at 8:00 AM
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12 comments:

  1. esbbostonMay 29, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    Icouldsellyouapairofshoes,ifyouthinkthatmighthelp.

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  2. diaMay 29, 2011 at 12:26 PM

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    leave its easy!

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  3. Kathy RobbinsMay 29, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    That was simple and brilliant at the same time! Enjoyed!
    Kathy
    www.robbinswrites.blogspot.com

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  4. MitchMay 30, 2011 at 4:29 AM

    very nice you should see http://www.vidasuperlative.blogspot.com

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  5. Usama RehmanMay 30, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    Absolutely Shallow!!!
    can u write worse than this!!!!

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  6. NiharikaMay 30, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    lol it was sort of funny :D nice work :D :)

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  7. AnonMay 30, 2011 at 8:45 AM

    Haha, that's cute. You could possibly expand on this poem a bit, or even start a new one quite similar to this - don't you think the blackhole would spread throughout your body? :D Your next poem could be titled, "A hole in my leg..." ;D


    http://lifelessonsfromtheaverageteenager.blogspot.com/

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  8. Alsa RMay 30, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    I like it. I have my own blog, but I want it to be good. Any tips?

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  9. teenagewerewolfMay 30, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    cool poem

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  10. Francesca B.May 30, 2011 at 9:37 PM

    Haha my friend once wrote a poem about a hole in his head :)

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  11. BeeJune 1, 2011 at 12:15 AM

    :-S At first I read it and I was completely sure that it was about a hole in your sock. THEN. I realized that it was about a hole in your foot. Now I am slightly disturbed.


    www.theartofbeebeeing.blogspot.com

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  12. AnonymousJune 5, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    You should really get that checked out :P

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